Thursday, January 24, 2008

wet rag

wrung out
misery welling up secretly liquid

seeping sodden
creeping sudden shadowing

oozing in fibre and pore

heavy and cold
limpen and leaden

scrap of enormity


Blogger Lee's River/Zlatovyek said...

"scrap of enormity"

beautifully expressed

8:21 AM  
Blogger goatman said...

Nice piece. I love the alliteration.
(I think that is what it is called?)
"The tintinabulation of the bells, bells, bells" comes to mind.

8:45 PM  
Blogger Echo said...

I am always caught in that scrap of enormity!
And too often am that limp rag.

touch touch


5:46 AM  

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