Wednesday, October 13, 2010

tipping

as summer tips over
tiptoe
toppling

headlong into autumn

the timeless pause before


my heart

tips over

into missing you

and over
again

2 Comments:

Blogger GreenWhisper said...

lettuce this is beautiful..so gentle..like a warm hug..

xx

1:39 AM  
Blogger kate said...

Interesting comment about blogging being cathartic - you don't respond to comments so why blog? Why not just keep a journal? I have kept a daily journal for thirty years and it is very cathartic - but to blog without responding to comments is like talking to oneself out loud - a public monologue. I have started to blog because I am interested in the response to some of my ideas- also, because I have a book to sell, I want to call atention to myself as a writer. I like teh idea of a blog as virtual converation. If I didn't want that I would stick to my journal

6:05 PM  

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