Thursday, August 17, 2006

Cinqain

Cinquain - inspired by this

Journey 
Here to somewhere
Facing changing landscapes
Shifting lost security bewilders
Passage




1 comment:

Bird said...

i just noticed the link to this from my blog - delightful. noone's ever done that before - i like it.

this is a lovely cinquain.

altho some folk consider the cinqain too ... formatted, i like to play with the structure (and sometimes break it) - it helps to bring a poetic message or image into sharp relief i think - as you have done here.

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